therefore you sing the better
I found a mistake! (nanana....)
You are a smile? XDAnd yes, I have I smile that girls die for!
Okay minor mistake... a instead of I. (You use to many I's, anyway )
Also, what use is a smile the girls drop dead over? Except you're a necrophiliac.... (but every sunnyboy has a dark side, right? )
Although I didn't read much detailed farther.... or I will need some chocolate too
@Felina
I would like 3rd person narration the better, too, as I stated. Or I will put to much of myself in it and then it's becoming a self-insert oO
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